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	<description>"Noesis" means intuition, cognition, or thinking.</description>
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		<title>Comment on The Wheel of Time E-Book Covers (image-heavy post) by Ben</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Sep 2010 18:18:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lu-

I think you&#039;re right about that tower in the Eye of the World! That&#039;s how Mat knew where it was in The Gathering Storm, because he and Rand had seen it clear back in book one.

I had forgotten about the bracelet, but I was pretty sure it was Moiraine because of the tiara, not to mention the dark hair and blue cloak and dress. What about those burning pages, though?

It was Knife of Dreams when he lost his hand, wasn&#039;t it? That&#039;s probably the scene.

I had totally forgotten about those mindboxes—in fact, I still can&#039;t remember then. Geez, I guess I need to reread the whole series again. I&#039;m not sure I have the heart to do that, though.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lu-</p>
<p>I think you&#8217;re right about that tower in the Eye of the World! That&#8217;s how Mat knew where it was in The Gathering Storm, because he and Rand had seen it clear back in book one.</p>
<p>I had forgotten about the bracelet, but I was pretty sure it was Moiraine because of the tiara, not to mention the dark hair and blue cloak and dress. What about those burning pages, though?</p>
<p>It was Knife of Dreams when he lost his hand, wasn&#8217;t it? That&#8217;s probably the scene.</p>
<p>I had totally forgotten about those mindboxes—in fact, I still can&#8217;t remember then. Geez, I guess I need to reread the whole series again. I&#8217;m not sure I have the heart to do that, though.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Wheel of Time E-Book Covers (image-heavy post) by Lu</title>
		<link>http://www.benjaminrose.com/?p=223&#038;cpage=1#comment-1954</link>
		<dc:creator>Lu</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 05 Sep 2010 16:49:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I thought there was a tall metal tower (one there was no way in or out of/foxes and snakes referece maybe) that first appeared in that book.  I would guess he&#039;s passing that, not the white tower. 

Moirane grabbed the bracelet away from lanfear, im sure what saved her, before entering the doorway - so i am pretty sure that is her, holding onto the lifesaving bracelet!

Knife of dreams - he looses his hand to balefire, i think. 

on winters heart, i thought it was rand cleasing the source, then the guy in the middle with the ball was the guy holding one of the mindboxes, sending in those he controls to try and stop rand.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I thought there was a tall metal tower (one there was no way in or out of/foxes and snakes referece maybe) that first appeared in that book.  I would guess he&#8217;s passing that, not the white tower. </p>
<p>Moirane grabbed the bracelet away from lanfear, im sure what saved her, before entering the doorway &#8211; so i am pretty sure that is her, holding onto the lifesaving bracelet!</p>
<p>Knife of dreams &#8211; he looses his hand to balefire, i think. </p>
<p>on winters heart, i thought it was rand cleasing the source, then the guy in the middle with the ball was the guy holding one of the mindboxes, sending in those he controls to try and stop rand.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Wheel of Time E-Book Covers (image-heavy post) by Ben</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Aug 2010 16:47:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Riotimus, don&#039;t get me wrong. I love comic books, too. But that style doesn&#039;t work for me as the cover of a novel.

Ah, I think you&#039;re right about Dragon Reborn and Winter&#039;s Heart. They are pretty generic scenes.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Riotimus, don&#8217;t get me wrong. I love comic books, too. But that style doesn&#8217;t work for me as the cover of a novel.</p>
<p>Ah, I think you&#8217;re right about Dragon Reborn and Winter&#8217;s Heart. They are pretty generic scenes.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Wheel of Time E-Book Covers (image-heavy post) by riotimus</title>
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		<dc:creator>riotimus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Aug 2010 23:38:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As a long-time comics fan I don&#039;t have the same art issues you do. A lot of these are really cool. Some of them leave me wanting. The two I don&#039;t care for are Eye of the World (I wouldn&#039;t pick a book with that cover off of the shelf unless three or four trusted friends recommended it) and Crown of Swords (looks like a mermaid story, just don&#039;t dig it). I love looking at different artists perspectives of different stories and characters. 

Eye of the World - It definetly looks more like the White Tower than this, but wasn&#039;t there a funny white bridge in the town where they docked on the river boat? That&#039;s the only other option I can think of. 

Dragon Reborn - If I had to speculate, which obviously I don&#039;t - but I will anyways - I would say that is towards the beginning of the novel when they are in hiding up in the mountains and Rand is hanging out trying to decide what to do without being anybody&#039;s puppet.

I&#039;m pretty sure Morraine did disappear in Fires of Heaven.

Winter&#039;s Heart - Isn&#039;t that Rand clowning around with the (t)(s)angreal (it&#039;s been too long and I don&#039;t care to look up the correct magical device) but it is the one where the little statue connects him to the giant statue of which there is a man and a woman version. I think it is what he and Nynaeve end up cleansing the power with.

R.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As a long-time comics fan I don&#8217;t have the same art issues you do. A lot of these are really cool. Some of them leave me wanting. The two I don&#8217;t care for are Eye of the World (I wouldn&#8217;t pick a book with that cover off of the shelf unless three or four trusted friends recommended it) and Crown of Swords (looks like a mermaid story, just don&#8217;t dig it). I love looking at different artists perspectives of different stories and characters. </p>
<p>Eye of the World &#8211; It definetly looks more like the White Tower than this, but wasn&#8217;t there a funny white bridge in the town where they docked on the river boat? That&#8217;s the only other option I can think of. </p>
<p>Dragon Reborn &#8211; If I had to speculate, which obviously I don&#8217;t &#8211; but I will anyways &#8211; I would say that is towards the beginning of the novel when they are in hiding up in the mountains and Rand is hanging out trying to decide what to do without being anybody&#8217;s puppet.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m pretty sure Morraine did disappear in Fires of Heaven.</p>
<p>Winter&#8217;s Heart &#8211; Isn&#8217;t that Rand clowning around with the (t)(s)angreal (it&#8217;s been too long and I don&#8217;t care to look up the correct magical device) but it is the one where the little statue connects him to the giant statue of which there is a man and a woman version. I think it is what he and Nynaeve end up cleansing the power with.</p>
<p>R.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Wheel of Time E-Book Covers (image-heavy post) by Ben</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Aug 2010 17:57:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like the concept of the Lord of Chaos and Crossroads of Twilight covers, but the execution isn&#039;t really my thing. Like I said, they look too much like the cover of a comic book rather than a novel.

By the way, any comments on what scenes are supposed to be represented by these covers? There are a few I can&#039;t identify.

The Eye of the World—Rand sailing on the river. (But is that the White Tower in the background? That wouldn&#039;t make sense.)

The Great Hunt—Mat blowing the Horn of Valere.

The Dragon Reborn—?

The Shadow Rising—Mat coming out of Rhuidean (right?).

The Fires of Heaven—Is that supposed to be Moiraine? Is that the book where she disappears?

Lord of Chaos—The battle of Dumai&#039;s Wells.

A Crown of Swords—Is that supposed to be Nynaeve and Lan in the water? I can&#039;t remember which book that was in.

Path of Daggers—Using the bowl of winds. (Which characters were they? Nynaeve, Elayne, and Aviendha, if I remember correctly.)

Winter&#039;s Heart—?

Crossroads of Twilight—Obviously Perrin leaving his axe behind, although I don&#039;t remember this scene specifically.

Knife of Dreams—?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like the concept of the Lord of Chaos and Crossroads of Twilight covers, but the execution isn&#8217;t really my thing. Like I said, they look too much like the cover of a comic book rather than a novel.</p>
<p>By the way, any comments on what scenes are supposed to be represented by these covers? There are a few I can&#8217;t identify.</p>
<p>The Eye of the World—Rand sailing on the river. (But is that the White Tower in the background? That wouldn&#8217;t make sense.)</p>
<p>The Great Hunt—Mat blowing the Horn of Valere.</p>
<p>The Dragon Reborn—?</p>
<p>The Shadow Rising—Mat coming out of Rhuidean (right?).</p>
<p>The Fires of Heaven—Is that supposed to be Moiraine? Is that the book where she disappears?</p>
<p>Lord of Chaos—The battle of Dumai&#8217;s Wells.</p>
<p>A Crown of Swords—Is that supposed to be Nynaeve and Lan in the water? I can&#8217;t remember which book that was in.</p>
<p>Path of Daggers—Using the bowl of winds. (Which characters were they? Nynaeve, Elayne, and Aviendha, if I remember correctly.)</p>
<p>Winter&#8217;s Heart—?</p>
<p>Crossroads of Twilight—Obviously Perrin leaving his axe behind, although I don&#8217;t remember this scene specifically.</p>
<p>Knife of Dreams—?</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Characters Are Not Alive by Ing</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Aug 2010 02:19:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;ve never had the &quot;characters talk to me&quot; kind of moment, though some of our Word Count Buddies people seem to have it happen all the time.  Sometimes I wonder if it&#039;s a chicken-and-egg thing: does that kind of flow not happen for me because I haven&#039;t spent enough time truly immersing myself in my own characters, or am I not immersing myself because I think I have to have that particular vibe to do it?

In contrast to Riotimus, I&#039;d say it&#039;s all about the story in the end. If you&#039;re telling a compelling story through the characters -- which is what nearly all good novels do -- then the characters will probably also be compelling.  I guess it&#039;s not a huge leap to suppose the characters could start kind of telling the story themselves in your mind. 

I think that like so many aspects of writing, this one gets romanticized and overblown.  If it&#039;s your own authentic way of writing (and it seems to be for a fair number of people), then that&#039;s cool, but it does tend to get exalted in the writerly zeitgeist as this mystic force that you either have if you&#039;re a &quot;real&quot; writer, or don&#039;t if you&#039;re not.  Which is not cool.

We&#039;ll leave the painfully obvious fact that (regardless of voice-in-head status) I&#039;m not a real fiction writer out of this for now.  :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;ve never had the &#8220;characters talk to me&#8221; kind of moment, though some of our Word Count Buddies people seem to have it happen all the time.  Sometimes I wonder if it&#8217;s a chicken-and-egg thing: does that kind of flow not happen for me because I haven&#8217;t spent enough time truly immersing myself in my own characters, or am I not immersing myself because I think I have to have that particular vibe to do it?</p>
<p>In contrast to Riotimus, I&#8217;d say it&#8217;s all about the story in the end. If you&#8217;re telling a compelling story through the characters &#8212; which is what nearly all good novels do &#8212; then the characters will probably also be compelling.  I guess it&#8217;s not a huge leap to suppose the characters could start kind of telling the story themselves in your mind. </p>
<p>I think that like so many aspects of writing, this one gets romanticized and overblown.  If it&#8217;s your own authentic way of writing (and it seems to be for a fair number of people), then that&#8217;s cool, but it does tend to get exalted in the writerly zeitgeist as this mystic force that you either have if you&#8217;re a &#8220;real&#8221; writer, or don&#8217;t if you&#8217;re not.  Which is not cool.</p>
<p>We&#8217;ll leave the painfully obvious fact that (regardless of voice-in-head status) I&#8217;m not a real fiction writer out of this for now.  <img src='http://www.benjaminrose.com/wordpress/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Knife of Dreams E-book Cover by Ing</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ing</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Aug 2010 02:03:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>All I remember are the covers I hated...which was almost all of them.  The Eye of the World might have been better than the rest, though.  This cover rocks.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All I remember are the covers I hated&#8230;which was almost all of them.  The Eye of the World might have been better than the rest, though.  This cover rocks.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The Wheel of Time E-Book Covers (image-heavy post) by Miranda Mann</title>
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		<dc:creator>Miranda Mann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Aug 2010 03:22:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These covers are SO MUCH COOLER than the ones on the actual books. I hope someday these make it to print. I like the Lord of Chaos one, but I just loved that book, plus Asha&#039;man and Aiel are my two fav groups, and there they are! Fires of Heaven is a very nice painting, and Mat is very cool on Shadow Rising. I actually like the Crossroads of Twilight cover, but that book drove me insane. And man, that Path of Daggers cover is very very cheesy. But it&#039;s still better than any of the printed book covers!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These covers are SO MUCH COOLER than the ones on the actual books. I hope someday these make it to print. I like the Lord of Chaos one, but I just loved that book, plus Asha&#8217;man and Aiel are my two fav groups, and there they are! Fires of Heaven is a very nice painting, and Mat is very cool on Shadow Rising. I actually like the Crossroads of Twilight cover, but that book drove me insane. And man, that Path of Daggers cover is very very cheesy. But it&#8217;s still better than any of the printed book covers!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Knife of Dreams E-book Cover by riotimus</title>
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		<dc:creator>riotimus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 15 Aug 2010 00:32:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s true that there were some bad ones. I suppose I just automatically think of The Eye of the World and what an epic cover that was and get all sentimental. There are a few that I strongly dislike. Otherwise I am at least okay with the rest, even if Kormack would have done them better.

R.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s true that there were some bad ones. I suppose I just automatically think of The Eye of the World and what an epic cover that was and get all sentimental. There are a few that I strongly dislike. Otherwise I am at least okay with the rest, even if Kormack would have done them better.</p>
<p>R.</p>
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		<title>Comment on My Characters Are Not Alive by riotimus</title>
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		<dc:creator>riotimus</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 14 Aug 2010 22:44:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I think the difference lies in the main drive of the novel - whether it is character driven or plot driven. 

If it is plot driven then the characters have to play nicely within the bounds established by the author. If a character won&#039;t comply, it gets modified so that it can&#039;t derail the carefully designed outline/synopsis. Tad Williams used this approach on the Memory, Sorrow, and Thorn series. He never said, &quot;I neutered my characters if they weren&#039;t going where I want them to,&quot; but he had a massively detailed outline and he stuck to it. He surely cracked a few eggs. 

If it is character driven, then the story will revolve less around the necessary checkpoints/quest-steps/clue-finding. The author probably will create a detailed character, stick them in a horrific/tense/miserable situation and see where they go. If the character takes the author on an interesting voyage it becomes a story. If not . . . toilet paper. Ouch. I&#039;ve got this heavy grade printer paper. Makes me glad I&#039;m not a perfectionist.

I don&#039;t think you see the second type very often in fantasy. If you do, I think it tends to be episodic RPG-turned-to-novel type stuff, as was done well by R. A. Salvadore with the Icewind Dale stuff and sucks butt from pretty much every other novel published by TSR (Hickman and Weis catch a break from me here because they just had so many good ideas - and great characters). 

Having spewed all of that I&#039;d like to state for the record that just because a novel is plot driven that it can&#039;t have great characters. It really has everything to do with the author&#039;s process.

I don&#039;t think you are missing out. As long as a character is compelling it doesn&#039;t really matter whether they are guiding the tour or playing the author&#039;s scavenger hunt.

R.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I think the difference lies in the main drive of the novel &#8211; whether it is character driven or plot driven. </p>
<p>If it is plot driven then the characters have to play nicely within the bounds established by the author. If a character won&#8217;t comply, it gets modified so that it can&#8217;t derail the carefully designed outline/synopsis. Tad Williams used this approach on the Memory, Sorrow, and Thorn series. He never said, &#8220;I neutered my characters if they weren&#8217;t going where I want them to,&#8221; but he had a massively detailed outline and he stuck to it. He surely cracked a few eggs. </p>
<p>If it is character driven, then the story will revolve less around the necessary checkpoints/quest-steps/clue-finding. The author probably will create a detailed character, stick them in a horrific/tense/miserable situation and see where they go. If the character takes the author on an interesting voyage it becomes a story. If not . . . toilet paper. Ouch. I&#8217;ve got this heavy grade printer paper. Makes me glad I&#8217;m not a perfectionist.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think you see the second type very often in fantasy. If you do, I think it tends to be episodic RPG-turned-to-novel type stuff, as was done well by R. A. Salvadore with the Icewind Dale stuff and sucks butt from pretty much every other novel published by TSR (Hickman and Weis catch a break from me here because they just had so many good ideas &#8211; and great characters). </p>
<p>Having spewed all of that I&#8217;d like to state for the record that just because a novel is plot driven that it can&#8217;t have great characters. It really has everything to do with the author&#8217;s process.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t think you are missing out. As long as a character is compelling it doesn&#8217;t really matter whether they are guiding the tour or playing the author&#8217;s scavenger hunt.</p>
<p>R.</p>
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